An Embarrassing Experience---Draft One
I think an embarrassing experience is call the wrong person. Why it is so embarrassing? Because I called the person,but she was not the person who I thought. At the moment,I really felt so embarrassed and I wanted to look for a hole to jump in. Because it was hard to say any word at the moment. And I really felt so sorry about her. After I went home,I coudn't forget the incident. I recalled the embarrassing experience time after time. I hope I will not meet up the same thing again.

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Why it is so embarrassing? Because I called the person
我建議這樣
Do you know why it is so embarrassing?
Let me tell you an embarrassing experience which was about calling the wrong person.
One day,while I was....
I saw a familiar gilr ,and I came to call her,but..
I wanted to look for a hole to jump in
我會用
I wanted to find a hole to hide
Because it was hard to say any word at the moment.
這樣用不行因為原因在上句
應用I wanted to look for a hole to jump in because it was hard to say any word at the moment.
既然大支都說那麼清楚了,那我就不抓妳的錯了。不過,我覺得妳真的是一個大笑話。ha!ha!ha!
寫的不錯喔....
缺點嘛!!好像大支都幫你挑出來了ㄟ.....
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