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Wednesday, January 03, 2007

My Bedroom---Draft One

My bedroom is warm and clean. When you enter the room,the bed is in front of the entrance. The restroom is next to the entrance. The closet is on the left and the chest of drawers is behind the closet. My dresser is across the closet. The bedside cupboard is next to the bed. The bed is between the chest of drawers and the bedside cupboard. The window is on the back wall and the bed is under it. Because the window, my bedroom is bright and warm. It is my beautiful bedrom. I like it very much.

9 Comments:

Blogger Sally Sun said...

那個你再介紹方位時也寫一下這些東西是做什麼的敘述
你這樣寫只是純粹表達位置可不可以在加些敘述
例如:我描寫到窗戶,我可透過窗戶....
櫃子是放....
Because the window, my bedroom
Because of the window
Because of +名詞

3:48 AM  
Blogger 梁宜靜 said...

Because the window=>because of the window...若要加名詞...記得要用 because of 唷!

4:46 AM  
Blogger Ryuka(暐) said...

"It is my beautiful bedrom"
bedroom拼錯了唷

7:45 PM  
Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said...

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1:44 AM  
Blogger Samantha*霓∥ said...

room,the bed is in front of
, the(要空格)

Because the window, my bedroom is
Because 後面+of

beautiful bedrom.
bedroom

1:45 AM  
Blogger Tina said...

好像都只是在敘述方位而已ㄟ....
加油喔!!相信你可以寫的更好ㄉ

6:37 AM  
Blogger 傻咩 said...

倒數第三行~Because the window應該用Because of ~因為後面是名詞的說~
bedrom拼錯哩~

7:47 PM  
Blogger FawnYma said...

room 的o… 好好笑喔!妳神經好大條…

8:01 PM  
Blogger Butterfly said...

可以善用關代讓句子不要那麼多的重複

9:56 PM  

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