diary 2/18
I go to carrefour(家樂福) with my father. I am very happy about the carrefour(家樂福). I have not gone there for a long time.Carrefour(家樂福) is a place where sells any things. So my father and I can buy any things which we want. Shopping is good and it can make me happy. No wonder people like to go shopping. But it is important for people to hold down. If we buy too much, our money will reduce a lot. I think I can't buy too much though my father asks me what I want to buy.

6 Comments:
阿達,你的結尾很奇怪ㄟ。還有你的家樂褔打那麼多次手不會酸嗎?
我也好久沒ㄑ了ㄟ!!
Shopping is good and it can make me happy.
可以縮成 and makes me happy
1..I go to carrefour(家樂福) with my father. I am very happy about the carrefour(家樂福). ->要用過去式吧!!感覺妳沒寫到去那裡發生的事呢?!
1..I go to carrefour(家樂福) with my father. I am very happy about the carrefour(家樂福). ->要用過去式吧!!感覺妳沒寫到去那裡發生的事呢?!
I have not gone there for a long time.Carrefour(家樂福)...家樂福前面要控格
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