Translation---draft1
1.(Program)
Choosing a TV program carefully is important. Though TV is a important channel to provide information and entertainment, it may have some defects. There are some full of violence and lust programs which have bad effects to teenagers. And spending too much time on TV hurting eyesight, too. Therefore, we should choose a healthy TV program. And the most important thing is do not be a TV fan.
2.(Computer)
A computer plays an important role in our life. It can help students hand in their homework quickly, and also help people send information. As long as you open a computer, you do love it . However, you must remind that do not sit in front of a computer too much time. Most of parents do not like children to depend on a computer. Especially, the discussion of bulletin board is dissipative time.
posted by 許雅婷 @ 8:41 PM
7 Comments:
1.Though TV is "an" important channel to provide information and entertainment
2.There are some "programs" full of violence and lust have bad effects to teenagers.
1..And spending too much time on TV hurting eyesight, too->沒有動詞ㄟ..
2..open a computer->電腦是用turn on
1.And spending too>>And可以用Besides,spending...
"TV fan(XDDDD 讓我笑一下)"
2. their homework >homeworks
you do love it這個跟老師發的那張好像不一樣耶
Though TV is "a" important channel to provide information and entertainment->an
1.And spending too much time on TV hurting eyesight, too那個hurting改hruts
2.Therefore, we should choose a healthy TV program. 我覺得可以用複數TV programs
3.Especially, the discussion of bulletin board is dissipative time.浪費時間那邊自己改
4.還有那個important用很多，可以用essential,significant,however也可以找一些詞替換
have effects on
and 不要一直出現
open非電器
turn on電器
important捕要一直出現
an important channel
have bad effects on...
turn on the computers
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