Autobiography(3~4)---draft1
During the Junior High School, I was an assistant to my history teacher. I learned how to handle things efficiently and have a strong responsibility from being an assistant. After the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High School, I decided to study in the Department of Applied Foreign Language. So I need to work hard in English. My association is about broadcasting. The teacher is nice and funny. He not only gives us a lot of time to study but also he takes us to somewhere about broadcasting. Our class is outstanding. In addition to grade, our class is excellent in sport. We always is the championship, like a volleyball competition and race of a group. I think it is the greatest class I have met.
I hope I can pass the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges, and get into a good technical university. After graduating, I will be a translator. But how can I make the dream come true? It is all up to my attitude of study.
posted by 許雅婷 @ 8:46 PM
8 Comments:
1."had" a strong responsibility from being an assistant.
2. but also "he" takes us to somewhere about broadcasting.
去he
3.We "are" "always" the "champion" 寫什麼is，好好笑
4.race of a group 是什麼?大隊接力嗎?
~妳的結尾還不錯~ 有笑果
We always is the championship, like a>>we are always
"We always is the championship, like a volleyball competition and race of a group."是"We are always"吧？念起來超不順的欸！
He not only gives us a lot of time to study but also "he" takes us to somewhere about broadcasting->不用加吧!!
1.like a volleyball competition and race of a group. 那個competition用複數，因為我們不只比過一場了
We always "is" the championship->應該是are吧
"had" a strong responsibility from being an assistant.
but also "he" takes us to somewhere about broadcasting->這個不用加吧!!
We "are" "always" the "champion"
We always "is" the championship, like a volleyball competition and race of a group.
we不能用is啦
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