I Am A Volunteer---draft 2

I live in Taipei and work as a volunteer in a hospital. I really feels good to get the opportunity to help people. Yesterday moring, an old woman screamed loudly and asked for help rescue her son. And I was confused with this situation. Then I determined to ask her what happened to her. She said that she did not have enough money to pay a medical bill, and pleading with the doctor to help her son. But the doctor just stared at her without saying anything. Finally, she gave up pleading for help. Hearing this situation, I was disappointed to this world. Though to pay a medical bill is a principle of seeing the doctor, and to help people is doctor's responsibility. Therefore, I decided to develop my public mind to raise funds for this old woman. I yelled loudly for raising funds at the entrance of this hospital. At last, I got enough money to pay medical bill for this old woman. And then this old woman appreciated me and gave me a big hug. Through this situation, I take on a new look to this world.

I Am A Volunteer draft 1

I live in Taipei and work as a volunteer in a hospital. It really feels good to get the opportunity to help people. Yesterday moring, an old woman screamed loudly and asked for helping rescueher son. And I was confused with this situation. Then I determined to ask her what happened to her. She said that she did not have enough money to pay a medical bill and she requested the doctor to help her son, but the doctor just stared at her without saying anything. Finally, she gave up requesting for help. After I heard this situation, I was disappoint to this world. Though to pay a medical bill is a principle of seeing the doctor, to help people is doctor's responsibility. Therefore, I decided to develop my public mind to raise funds for this old woman. I yelled loudly for raising funds at the entrance of this hospital. Lastly I got enough money to pay medical bill for this old woman. And then this old woman appreciated me and gave me some fruit. Through this situation, I take on a new look to this world.