I am different from what I was five years ago---draft1

Five years ago, I was a junior high student. I was too busy to do my own things because I had to go to a cram school from Monday to Friday. And I had few concepts about time so that I could not arrange my schedule. As a consequence, I had a hard time in that year. Though I was moiling, I learned to be optimistic. From then on, I always laughed loudly. Now, I am a senior high student. I am more relaxed than five years ago because I do not have to go a cram school. And I have already thought what subject I need to read at first before studying. In this year, I become a decisive person. By the way, I am much happier than before because of my friends and my germination. I wish that I could accomplish my goal and have a solid life.

take exercise---draft 2

Taking exercise is essential to me because it has a lot of advantages. First, people can lose weight by exercising. For many girls, it is a dream to lose weight in order to look beautiful. If these girls want to achieve their dreams, they have to take more exercise. Second, exercise can advance the blood circulation. Generally, people usually stay at home that is called a couch-potato. However, to be a couch-potato may lead to congestion of blood circulation which people must stand up for a while and move bodies to avoid this situation. The most important reason is that people can keep healthy. Having a healthy body will pay off a life. A longer life is treasure which let us have more time to do more valuable things. Therefore, taking exercise plays an significant role in our lives.