I am different from what I was five years ago---draft1

Five years ago, I was a junior high student. I was too busy to do my own things because I had to go to a cram school from Monday to Friday. And I had few concepts about time so that I could not arrange my schedule. As a consequence, I had a hard time in that year. Though I was moiling, I learned to be optimistic. From then on, I always laughed loudly. Now, I am a senior high student. I am more relaxed than five years ago because I do not have to go a cram school. And I have already thought what subject I need to read at first before studying. In this year, I become a decisive person. By the way, I am much happier than before because of my friends and my germination. I wish that I could accomplish my goal and have a solid life.

take exercise---draft 2

Taking exercise is essential to me because it has a lot of advantages. First, people can lose weight by exercising. For many girls, it is a dream to lose weight in order to look beautiful. If these girls want to achieve their dreams, they have to take more exercise. Second, exercise can advance the blood circulation. Generally, people usually stay at home that is called a couch-potato. However, to be a couch-potato may lead to congestion of blood circulation which people must stand up for a while and move bodies to avoid this situation. The most important reason is that people can keep healthy. Having a healthy body will pay off a life. A longer life is treasure which let us have more time to do more valuable things. Therefore, taking exercise plays an significant role in our lives.

take exercise---draft 1

Taking exercise is important to me because it has a lot of advantage. First, with exercise, people can lose weight. For many girls, it is a dream to lose weight in order to look beautiful. If these girls want to achieve their dreams, they have to take more exercise. Second, exercise can advance the blood circulation. Generally, people usually stay at home do the same thing that is to be a couch-potato. However, to be a couch-potato may lead to stuff the blood circulation. To avoid this situation, people must stand up for a while and move bodies which can advance the blood circulation. The most important reason is that I can keep health. Having a healthy body will pay off a life. A longer life is treasure which let us have more time to do more valuable things. Therefore, taking exercise plays an important role in our lives.

An Unforgrttable Experience---draft 2

When I was seven years old, I was sent to a day care center. Therefore, I had to go a day care center after school. When I arrived there, it was about an afternoon. And the teachers requested the whole students to take a nap in a basement. After 30 minutes, I felt that I wanted to go a toilet, but I was too shy to go to pee pee alone. Then I decided to ask my friends who wanted to go a toilet. Nevertheless, no one answered me instead of sleeping. After that, I had no idea how to do it because I was hurry-skurry to pee pee. So I made a stupid method in order to solve my problem.The method which I did was yelled loudly to make myself heard by my teachers. In the end, the teachers heard my sound and lead me to a toilet. I was worried after I had solved my problem, because I thought I would be blamed. Conversely, they consoled with me and told me not to be shy. I think it is such an unforgettable experience to me because it is too ridiculous.

An Unforgrttable Experience---draft 1

When I was seven years old, I was sent to a day care center. Therefore, I had to go a day care center after school. When I arrived there, it was about an afternoon. And the teachers requested the whole students to take a nap in a basement. After 30 minutes, I felt that I wanted to go a toilet, but I was too shy to go to pee pee alone. Then I decided to ask my friends who wanted to go a toilet. Nevertheless, no one answered me instead of sleeping. After that, I had no idea how to do it because I was hurry-skurry to pee pee. So I made a stupid method in order to solve my problem.
The method which I do is yelled loudly to make the teachers heard. In the end, the teachers heard my sound and lead me to a toilet. After solving my problem, I had had worried, I would have been blamed. Conversely, they consoled with me, and told me do not be shy. I think it is such an unforgettable experience to me because it is too ridiculous.

I Am A Volunteer---draft 2

I live in Taipei and work as a volunteer in a hospital. I really feels good to get the opportunity to help people. Yesterday moring, an old woman screamed loudly and asked for help rescue her son. And I was confused with this situation. Then I determined to ask her what happened to her. She said that she did not have enough money to pay a medical bill, and pleading with the doctor to help her son. But the doctor just stared at her without saying anything. Finally, she gave up pleading for help. Hearing this situation, I was disappointed to this world. Though to pay a medical bill is a principle of seeing the doctor, and to help people is doctor's responsibility. Therefore, I decided to develop my public mind to raise funds for this old woman. I yelled loudly for raising funds at the entrance of this hospital. At last, I got enough money to pay medical bill for this old woman. And then this old woman appreciated me and gave me a big hug. Through this situation, I take on a new look to this world.

I Am A Volunteer draft 1

I live in Taipei and work as a volunteer in a hospital. It really feels good to get the opportunity to help people. Yesterday moring, an old woman screamed loudly and asked for helping rescueher son. And I was confused with this situation. Then I determined to ask her what happened to her. She said that she did not have enough money to pay a medical bill and she requested the doctor to help her son, but the doctor just stared at her without saying anything. Finally, she gave up requesting for help. After I heard this situation, I was disappoint to this world. Though to pay a medical bill is a principle of seeing the doctor, to help people is doctor's responsibility. Therefore, I decided to develop my public mind to raise funds for this old woman. I yelled loudly for raising funds at the entrance of this hospital. Lastly I got enough money to pay medical bill for this old woman. And then this old woman appreciated me and gave me some fruit. Through this situation, I take on a new look to this world.